Sorry, but for legal reasons, not to mention time constraint reasons, I can’t. Please don’t send it to me. (That includes synopses of your story/book/poem, or detailed descriptions of the plot and characters.) If you want more explanation as to why, read this. I know it can be frustrating when you feel like no one will read your writing, so there are places online I recommend where you can get critiques. www.critters.org for adults and teens, and www.inkpop.com for teens, specifically.